Wednesday, 15 February 2012

Love speaks a thousand volumes

We often we under estimate teens, moan about them use the word tumble weed in a sentence or two. But what is life without the odd moan or two?. So below is my sons poem he's in the top English set at a very posh state school ( so posh its almost private!) and the education is second to none.

My loves for you was like a thousand roses
My heart fell, when I saw you
Your reflection is as beautiful as the moon
The light that becomes of your scent

But when you spoke to me you gave me tears
You made me shrink and wobble in fear
you said I was blind , in my own contact
You made me cry when you walk away

but I will faithful, caring , truthful to you
I will makes promises to keep you safe
You will be in my heart for ever
When you fell into my arms

Written by J Toplis age 13    ( So please don't copy or rip off his poem  , Many Thanks)


  1. Lovely little poem. A Wordsworth in the making?

  2. Aww that is beautiful, it even made my stone cold heart flutter a little @mummylion

  3. Wow, such a long time ago for me to remember, but such real love to feel at such a tender age x Beautiful.


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